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"It's all very simple..." Conan began with his conclusion, pausing for a moment to heighten the suspense.

"Hurry up and tell us DUMMY!" Goerge says getting annoyed and bonking his head, "It's almost time for our parents to pick us up!"

"Well, I believe it was in fact... PAUL!" Conan said.

"But you said it wasn't!" Goerge accused.

"I never said it defiantly wasn't I said there was a chance it wasn't, just let me explain, Paul obviously got mad at Jack because he couldn't play tag with them, I remember seeing him walk away from Jack and his friends all mad, So he wanted to frame him and make it look like he did it. So then he took his name tag and took of his to, but his on top and pencil so it looked like Jack tried to frame him, but he was actually framing Jack." Conan concluded smartly just like Jimmy, "Let me see that, I'll prove it," He said and took the sticker, then he ripped off a stick showing it was to stickers one said Jack and the other said. Paul.

"Wow, you were right," Amy, Mitch, and Goerge all looked in amazement as Conan nodded his head, full of pride.

"Time to go kids, why are you all in t- Aw," She said seeing the poor little teddy, "Let me get that and clean it up, Jake," She remembered who's it was, and picked up the little bear after getting past Conan and his friends, "Now all of you get out there, your parents are waiting," All the children got out to the main room and Conan ran to Rachel.

"Guess what!" Conan yelled sounding kind of like Jimmy after he would solve a case.

"What is it, Conan?" She laughed as they went out of the building.

"I solved a murder case!" He yelled to her, Rachel froze in her tracks. "Well, I guess it wasn't a real murder case, it was just a teddy bear, but it almost got flushed down the toilet," He decided not noticing her freeze and relax.

"Well, we better get going," Rachel said and we went back to our house and I saw my grandpa sitting on the couch looking at the T.V broadcast.

"The last place the famous detective, Jimmy was seen was at the amusement park with his fianca, and not even she knows where to find him. He's just up and disappeared, somewhere. Did you see that cute little boy? I hear it's he's and Rachel's new son, to bad he can't meet him," The T.V announcer's switched off every sentence and Conan's head started to hurt again.

"You okay Conan," Rachel asked in concern as his grandpa also turned around to look at him but quickly scoffed and looked back to the T.V.

"Yeah, I'm okay," Conan said completely dropping the baby talk, "I have to use the bathroom," He said and walked off to go potty.

"I thought he wasn't potty trained," Rachel said in confusion, remembering this morning, "Anyway, dad, did you find a job,"

"Yeah, there's a case for me to solve now that, that boy is gone," He said in hate at the mention of Jimmy, "In fact I better go now,"

"I wanna go! I solved a murder case at school! I could help!" Conan yelled running in the room and zipping his pants up on the way.

"This job isn't for kids," He stated and went out the door and called for a cab.

"It's very dangerous Conan, and there's all kinds of dangerous bad guys," Rachel said trying to talk him out of wanting to go.

"Then you can stay!" Conan said and ran into the cab, Rachel barely able to make it in the cab to go.

" What are you doing here?"

"I'm coming with you Grandpa!" Conan said, "Glad you decided to come, Rachel!" He smiled Jimmy's smile.

A/N: That's all for now, I'm tired, I know it's kind of short but, this is just me getting back into my writing. My internet go shut off for a LONG time, but we finally got it back, so I'm trying to get back into my writer life! I'll try my best to get into LONG CHAPTERS!
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:iconconan44sj:
whens ch 5 gonna be here
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:icontoddlernaruto:
Finally :D, took you forever :P.

Chapter 5 soon I hope? :)
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:iconpacificthehedgehog:
Good to see you back. Also this was a fine addition to the series and I'm almost positive every writer on DA has done this once or twice.
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~rosefairy0 Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Yes, I know, it probably has already been done. But someone asked me for it so, that's where the story came from. It's a cool story though and I'm having fun with it.
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:iconpacificthehedgehog:
I meant the short chapter after a long period of time, the idea, at least to me, is new. sorry for the confusion.
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~rosefairy0 Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Oh, I see. Yeah, thanks for letting me know. I'll start getting longer chapters...
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:iconpacificthehedgehog:
Long or short both are a joy to read.
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